Sunday, February 21, 2010
Love-cause intro (take 2)
I am sitting here at my desk, it's late; maybe midnight on saturday night. My thoughts are wandering off even though I'm supposed to be reading my psychology book. All of a sudden I see a vision of the past...I see the VFW hall, it's all decorated up with red and pink balloons and streamers everywhere for a dance. A Valentines Day AA dance...A chem free event. The VFW hall is mainly used for meetings for AA. Sometimes they use it for a veterans event function as well. I look closer at the scene and there I was sitting next to Erica a friend of mine from the program. We were laughing and giggiling because there was a couple of hotties sitting a few tables in front of us. I noticed that they kept turning around and looking back at us and smiling. The guy on the right was soooo handsome. He had a very nice smile, great hair. Great taste in clothes and he actually looks like he takes care of himself.(unlike alot of men) My friend was checking out the other guy and went over and asked them two to dance with us. They said sure so we went out on the dance floor and had a great time. The dancing came so natural for us both. His name was Geromy, and little did he or I know what was going to develop in the years to come. It only took one dance, and we were hooked. LOVE; go figure.
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Oh, yes! Very strong hook--keep this one! But my comment on the other version still holds--we need a bridge sentence.
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