We have a great relationship today and I see a very happy and successful future ahead of us. We both have dreams and goals in life, to keep climbing that "ladder." Whichever way it looks like, we are never going to give up on our love and purpose in life. We are still in love and just as happy as the day we met at that lucky Valentine's Day dance. If anything I think our relationship has grown quite a bit over the last two years. We have had smooth sailing and rough seas to thank for that. We are still learning today how to communicate properly with one another, and to continue to grow for the better. We do learn from mistakes of the past, that is what makes us who we are today.
Lastly, to all those "love critics" out there that kept telling us we wer'nt going to make it this far; looks like we beat the odds now, did'nt we?
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Sure, I'll take this essay. Your support is strong and clear, definitely three middle grafs that explain the whys behind the love. Outro definitely adds and is more than a summary. The only weakness I see in this is the lack of a clear bridge or preview at the end of graf 1--that would have helped.
ReplyDeleteHere's some housekeeping for next time: gather all the assignments together into one essay so I don't have to read them backwards. Double space between grafs so I can see that easily.